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Wednesday, 30 March 2011

The unbidden heaven -

A deep slumber holds no substitute, it's like a passing moment, you can't replace it. It doesn't matter how hard you try, where ever you head, the journey embraces an end of pure vanity. So, I suggest you save yourself the effort and time and just trust me with what I said. Or you can give it a try, prove me otherwise and I shall plant a kiss on your forehead.

I was lost in a moment, a moment of an endearing kip when the sweet tweets along with the heavenly plops created by the unintentional dives lured an exit from the moment. I was back, I thought I was. My blurry gaze dangled in an attempt to keep up with the swings, tranced by the gentle breeze. I adored the beauty of the see-through swings, covered with the comely petals for a while but as much as I wanted to seize the moment the senses cried for a switch and so it happened. The trip from eyes to the ear-drums was hardly noticed and yet the senses claim boredom and fatigue. The unwanted switch dragged me into hearing the giant trees rustle and bow in an embrace. An embrace I had yet to figure out for it happened so fast I could only notice the senses whine so, I got up and my legs felt light , and I made the switch to the vision for I wanted to make the senses suffer. I was confused and I rushed towards the green little hillock that stared right into my eyes. There's no simile to explain the flight, did I fly, was I pushed, I'd never know. Sadly, the senses agreed on switching again and  I felt a delicate touch on my nape, I turned in awe to put into place the new puzzle created by the unknown but I needed the switch. My senses were planning on making me suffer this time and so, my vision went black, I couldn't see. I felt a dagger digging deep in my head, and I switched ends to the beginnings and fell back. An exquisite fall to the merry land of dreams..

I rubbed my eyes, and I saw the ps3 yawning right in front of my face. I could hear myself talk and I could see too. I wasn't cuffed to a single sense anymore and I didn't have to fight for my right to have them all at once. It felt like all the senses had taken a lesson, it was pleasing to see them united. The unbidden heaven, and all it's offerings require control beyond the blend of a Human and Satan. You've to chain the latter to be able to unlock the unity in a heaven promised.

And I've promised my body a few hours of genuine rest. Good day to you all

3 comments:

  1. You have to look into dictionary for the difficult vocabulary. But it's worth it, and as far as i get it, i think it was about the escape from the time and space phenomena.On which i also ponder a lot. Dreams are also sometimes very confusing for me, not able to detect the time passing by and also very few senses are detected there.

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  2. This wanton, need, for letting the senses flow objectively through countless dimensions.. I've yet to experience it with using an external stimuli. Sweet conversion of thoughts into words. Many experiences are hard to put into words, you just did what few can do. :)

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  3. Becks - Thank you very much, it's good to be read by a writer :). I wrote what I felt, a confused moment of reality and a dream. Many call it a lucid dream, but it wasn't very lucid either. I had the will, but I didn't have the control :)

    Aimal - True that, I tried my bit. Love how you coat an appreciation with sheer art. Thank you very much for giving it a read :)

    I'd like both of you to drop a link to your blogs, I at times want to read. Something written by people around me.

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